Writing Wednesday: The Power of POV

(note: this blog is repurposed from one posted June 2, 2013, called “Walk a Mile In My Shoes”.)

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As a writer, I’ve learned if a scene isn’t working, try changing the point of view (POV) in which it is written. That means to write the action from another character’s perspective; see what a character sees, hear what he hears, smell what she smells, do what the character would do; use the character’s motivations and background to filter what is happening on the page. It’s amazing how much situations can change.

I watched exactly one episode of the 1980’s TV show thirtysomething, but that episode has stayed with me. A single incident was shown over and over, but each time from a different character’s perspective. The various interpretations were wildly diverse. And eye-opening.

Law enforcement knows the same event may not be reported in the same way by eyewitnesses, which is why they prefer one-on-one interviews.

Seeing the Broadway hit Wicked reinforced my belief that POV is one of the most powerful tools in a writer’s toolkit. L. Frank Baum’s Wicked Witch of the West presented as a sympathetic character while Dorothy becomes the villain? Oh yeah. Completely.

I recently read Charlaine Harris’s Sookie Stackhouse series. Then my husband and I started binge-watching True Blood (the TV series based on the books). The first thing I noticed was that while the books are all written from Sookie’s POV, the TV program used multiple points of view in order to include multiple story threads. It was interesting to see how an incident in the books was changed for TV and which character’s POV was chosen for that particular story arc.

The next time a scene doesn’t hang true for you, try reimagining it from another point of view. You might just find the correct angle from which to tell your story.

The Zucchini Solution

It’s zucchini season. I am not fond of zucchini. Or yellow summer squash. I prefer the heartier winter squashes. But TV Stevie likes them, so periodically I try to find a way to cook them that isn’t too disgusting. I think I created a keeper. And I was clever enough to write down what I did immediately after supper that evening.

Pour about a quarter inch of olive oil in a large skillet.

Add boneless skinless chicken breast that has been cut into bite-sized pieces.

Season heavily with McCormick Grill Mates Montreal Chicken seasoning.

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Cook over medium heat.

When the chicken is is done, add chopped onion and garlic–I used a lot of chopped garlic–to the pan.

Cook this for a few minutes, until the onions are translucent.

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Add 1 medium zucchini, thinly sliced, and 1 medium summer squash, thinly sliced.

Season well with Mrs. Dash Grilling Blends for Chicken.

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When the squash is thoroughly cooked (15-20 minutes, stirring often)

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add 1 14.5 oz can of petite diced tomatoes.

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Cook for several minutes.

Drizzle in some balsamic vinegar.

Cook for several more minutes.

Transfer to glass baking dish (I use a round quiche pan).

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Top with shredded mozzarella

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and microwave for 1 minute (or until cheese is melted).

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That’s it. Yes, it’s heavy on the seasonings, but one of the reasons I don’t care for summer squashes is their lack of flavor. They are all texture and no taste.

Elements of (My) Style

Moonlight Serenade features a country band. Most of the musicians wear hats.

Toke Lobo

Somehow, while I was writing this book, I accumulated cowboy hats. Now, I like hats. I own quite a collection. But three cowboy hats?

hat-sun

This purple hat is crush-able for easy packing and is supposed to have magical sun-screening properties. I bought it before going to Reno in for the RWA conference in 2005, but I don’t think I’ve ever worn it.

hat-leather

This one is actually a leather “barn” hat. It reminds me of the hat worn by the model on the cover of Moonlight Serenade. I was very pleased to note the similarities, such as the braided band.

hat pink wool

This is my favorite. It’s wool. It’s pink. I think I bought this before going to Dallas for the 2004 RWA conference. I wore it, too. There may even be pictures of me in it floating around on the Internet. Oh, and I have matching pink leather gloves.

I think it’s very important for an author to have tools to put her in the frame of mind to write her story.  Hats are one of mine.

Moonlight Serenade, on sale, March 26, 2014.

 

MoonlightSerenade Final Cover with Quote